Working on the byline

My original byline was:

Remember Me
Jade is schizophrenic and has long forgotten her imaginary friend Aimee. However, she finds a photo album and all her good memories come flooding back.

However, in my draft Mr Andrews said that it was too literal and gave the story away. I worked on it and tried to think up of something more mysterious. I felt the tital 'Unforgettable Memories' didn't sound very interesting so I changed it to 'Remember Me'. However, I later found out that this was a title for a movie so 'Unforgettable Desires' became the title. To make it catchy, I called it 'Unforgettable and thus the name stuck' This is my final byline:

Unforgettable
After finding an old photo album, Jade has flashbacks of the past and a friend who has mysteriously disappeared.

Mr Andrews said it's good and doesn't give the whole movie away. I'm very happy with it.