Progress

Well so far, I've compiled a basic plan for my film.

PROPS:

Photo Album

Photos [in the album]

Desk

Lots of books, photos

2 pairs of rollerblades

Towels

Umbrella

Vase

Flower

Table

Schoolbag

Invitation written on paper

Balloons

Cake + candles

Loud music

Pill bottle

Kitchen appliances

Setting:

Basic room [boarding house?]

Park/road [Macintosh Island Park]

Beach [Main Beach]

Corridor with vase [Someone’s house]

Party room [function room somewhere]

Kitchen [Someone’s house, or boarding house]

Actors needed:

Girl to play Jade

Girl to play Aimee

Girl to play Mother [Hartlee’s mum? Teacher?]

Extras for the party [friends and volunteers]

Lifeguard

GENRE: Drama


Right now, we am making a production schedule.


TImeline- preproduction

Developing my concept into a short film.

According to Wikipedia, the definition of a short film is a film that is anything that is not long enough to be defined as a full length film. The films we are making in class are considered short films and Mr Andrews said that they need to be about 4-6 minutes. I think my film can easily make it in the time frame, the only problems for me is the film going overtime! Below is a timeline of how long everything should go for.

Intro: 30-45 secs [Jade finds the photo album]
1st memory: 45 secs - 1 minute [Jade is rollerblading with Aimee]
2nd memory: 30-35 secs [Beach]
3rd memory: 45-60 secs [Jade scrunches up invitation]
4th memory: 30-60 secs [Jade is at party]
Kitchen scene: 30-45 secs [Jade takes the medication]

+ transitional scenes between the memories: around 30 seconds [Jade showing emotion and turning the page]

Altogether, I'm looking at a film between 240-335 seconds. In other words, 4-6 minutes.

Including the credits, the film will probably go for a maximum time of 7 minutes.

Reflection

· Describe any problems or difficulties you encountered in this unit or during the planning process;
· Discuss how your plot development, character planning and research helped you to write your treatment;
· Discuss whether the activities and examples provide on BlackBoard helped you to develop an effective treatment;
· Discuss whether you have made clear use of the appropriate genre conventions and film language throughout your storyboards;
· Describe any problems or difficulties you encountered when drawing/creating your storyboards;
· Describe any skills or techniques you have discovered during the project;

Discuss your feelings about the pre-production task:
· Does your project clearly depict a genre film?
· Are you satisfied with the final result?
· Are there things you would like to change?
· Did you manage your time effectively? If not, how can you work to improve this?
· If you could start again what would you do differently?

During the pre-production process, I experienced a few difficulties including a lack of organistation [I realised this early and tried to be more organised], inability to draw well [practice really helped, and the storyboards we did in class made me realise that I really needed this] and adding a good twist to the plot [I brainstormed and tried my best to think creatively], all of which I resolved successfully.
Developing the plot, characters and setting were essential when writing the treatment. Once I settled on an idea, I found that I knew where I was going with the treatment. If I hadn't have done this, I would probably find myself wandering off into a brand new idea.
The activities and examples on blackboard were beneficial when I was writing my treatment. I found that the example treatment was good and that there were several helpful documents about writing the treatment and how to adjust the format.
I made use of appropriate film language and genre conventions in my storyboards by carefully researching the genre and going over the documents on blackboard. I found that last term's unit helped me understand all the different cinematographic techniques as well as mise-en-scene. Watching the sample sequences also helped me get a good idea of what techniques and shot types look effective in movies.
When creating storyboards, I found that I used up much more paper than expected, and therefore had to print off new ones. The only problem was that my printer was low on ink so as a result I had to conserve paper. Also, I had trouble drawing with great detail so my shots looked very basic. However, I made good use of the box to the right and added in details in the 'notes' section, outlining the types of angles (since high and low angles were too difficult to draw) and I added camera movements too such as panning, pulling back and spiralling.
I have discovered that I can visualise my film and successfully put my vision onto paper. Also, I found that as I drew my storyboards I came up with creative parts to my story so as a result I altered my treatment slightly when new ideas came up.

I feel my film quite clearly shows the drama genre because of the music I am planning to use (Moonlight Sonata) which sets a mellow mood and drama films usually have mellow moods. Also, my film is quite slow which is another genre convention. Drama films have distinct and often dramatic conflicts, and I believe that if filmed skillfully with the correct lighting, setting, props and cinematography my film will successfully portray the drama genre.
I am quite satisfied with the final result, as I put a lot of effort into the assignment.
The only part I would like to change are the drawings because I feel that given more time, I could add colour and shading to make the storyboards really come to life.
I didn't manage my time effectively. I made a late start to the assignment, due to uncertainty about the plot. In future years I will think of a creative plot when I get given the assignment, and verify with a teacher. As a result of the plot change, I had to redraw some storyboards and modify my treatment accordingly.
If I could start again I would definitely start this assignment early as it is long and took up more time than expected. I would also maybe try storyboarding using photoshop and create digital images to replace my drawings.

My plot in three acts

Act 1: Jade is cleaning her desk and discovers an old photo album. She looks through it and sees photos which trigger flashbacks. In the first photo, she sees a photo of rollerblades. A montage starts and this montage is largely based around sound (sound of rollerblades being lifted, Jade sitting on a chair, doing up both rollerblades and the final 'click' of the buckle) and then she teaches a very uncoordinated Aimee [invisible friend] how to rollerblade. They both laugh at her comical falls and inability to rollerblade. Aimee and Jade never hold hands to support eachother, hinting to the audience that something may not be right. In her next flashback, Jade sees herself at the beach splashing Aimee. They are both having a great time. The camera cuts to a lifeguard's shoulder. He only sees Jade which hints to the audience that something isn't right. Jade then gets out of the water and Aimee follows. The mood created by these two scenes is one of happiness.

Act 2: Jade's third flashback occurs because she sees a picture of a flower vase. She sees herself holding an invitation to her 70's party which is addressed to Aimee. Jade contemplates the invitation before scrunching it up and angrily tossing it onto the floor as she leaves for school. Jade's mum comes and picks it up and reads it. She smiles and excitedly runs to her husband and says 'it's working' [the audience will now start to wonder what really happened to Aimee]
In her final flashback, Jade is at her party. She looks unhappy and is passive. Her friends try and dance with her and cheer her up but do no succeed. When Jade blows out her candles, she wishes for a 'real best friend' [the audience will think that they had a fight of some sort]

Act 3: Jade's mum calls her over and Jade closes the photo album. In the kitchen, Jade is heard talking to her mum. She places a pill bottle on the table, with the label reading 'Jade Aaron. Condition: Schizophrenia' She then talks to her mum, who asks what she was doing. Jade replies that she found an old photo album and remembered Aimee. Her mum tells her that Aimee isnt real and that Jade made her up. Jade says 'I know, but our memories are unforgettable'

Storyboarding

Storyboarding was a long and strenuous task. I spent a long time making the storyboards. Storyboards are made up of:



  • Drawings (To my luck, I am a terrible drawer barely able to draw more than stick figures...)

  • Description of action/dialogue (I included a lot of detail for each scene)

  • Shot type (Long shot, close-up, medium shot etc)

  • Camera position/movement (panning, high angle, pull-backs etc)

  • Notes

After 14 pages of storyboards, I feel that anyone who picks it up can see my story just as I do.


I think that next time, I should start on my storyboards earlier because although I had drawn the pictures, the descriptions next to them took a long time to write. As a result, it took me hours to finish off my storyboards tonight.



I played around with opening titles for my film. I think that French Script MT will be the best choice.


I also looked at different music I could use. I'm thinking Moonlighy Sonata by Beethoven would sound good playing in the background.



If I could do this assigment again, I would definitely use my time better and not leave most of the descriptions to the last minute. I finished my treatment early which was a positive, and was pretty much happy with it. However, as I was storyboarding I had a few new ideas so I changed the treatment accordingly. Next time, I will definitely be more aware of how much time the descriptions next to the storyboards take to write and explain, so I will priorotise them as opposed to doing all the drawings first without writing the descriptions.

Working on the byline

My original byline was:

Remember Me
Jade is schizophrenic and has long forgotten her imaginary friend Aimee. However, she finds a photo album and all her good memories come flooding back.

However, in my draft Mr Andrews said that it was too literal and gave the story away. I worked on it and tried to think up of something more mysterious. I felt the tital 'Unforgettable Memories' didn't sound very interesting so I changed it to 'Remember Me'. However, I later found out that this was a title for a movie so 'Unforgettable Desires' became the title. To make it catchy, I called it 'Unforgettable and thus the name stuck' This is my final byline:

Unforgettable
After finding an old photo album, Jade has flashbacks of the past and a friend who has mysteriously disappeared.

Mr Andrews said it's good and doesn't give the whole movie away. I'm very happy with it.

Key Locations

Jade’s room: Jade’s room is square in shape and well lit. The desk is wooden and very messy. There is a bed on the opposite side of the room with striped grey sheets on top. To the left of the desk is a bookcase with many books as well as figurines and other trinkets.

A street: a long grey asphalted road stretches down for a kilometre. There are a few small hills on the road. There is a concreted pathway to the left of the road and there are many houses on either side of it.

The beach: warm white sand covers the beach and tracks from patrol cars are indented in it. There are small waves at the shore and there are not as many people swimming as it is afternoon. The lifeguard tower is still operating and lifeguards are on the lookout for any possible dangers which the swimmers could face.

The corridor: there is a glass vase with a beautiful red rose standing on a table. A large mirror hangs twenty centimeters above the table. The corridor has wooden flooring. A schoolbag leans against a white painted wall and a family portrait hangs above it.

The party room: Many balloons are floating all through the party room. Loud disco music is playing and multi-coloured lights as well as a disco ball illuminate the room. There are eleven party guests dressed in 70’s fashion attire and there is a pile of presents in the corner of the room.

The Kitchen: the kitchen consists of a long black granite bench top with a sink, stove, oven, microwave and refrigerator. The kitchen is well cleaned and contains many small appliances including a blender, coffee maker and toaster.

Key Characters

Key Characters
Jade is a tall teenager with black hair. She is quiet and keeps to herself most of the time. Jade is very close to her parents and is protective of them. She has a mental illness, in which she had an imaginary friend named Aimee. Jade started taking medication for her condition which made her lose touch with her imaginary friend. However, although she is on medication she still remembers Aimee very well and all the good times she thought they had. Jade has since accepted that Aimee isn’t real and continues to live a normal life.



Aimee is a figment of Jade’s imagination. She has long brown hair which she wears in pigtails and is happy and bubbly. She brings out the happy side of Jade. Aimee enjoys spending time with her and loved going to the beach and park. She is happy to do what Jade wants to do.



Jade’s mum is very supportive of Jade. She is motherly and enjoys talking with her. She has short brown hair which is straight. Jade’s mum constantly looks for signs that Jade’s condition is improving and is ecstatic when she does.



Character Profile Worksheet
Basic Information/Statistics

Name: Jade Aaron
Age: 16
Current Residence: Sydney, Australia
Occupation: Student
Talents/Skills: Figure skating, art

Physical Characteristics:

Height: 168cm
Weight: 50kg
Race: Caucasian
Skin Colour: Beige
Eye Colour: Hazel
Glasses/Contact Lenses: None
Hair Colour: Black
Facial Shape: Oval
Distinguishing Features: High cheekbones and long black hair usually worn in a side ponytail
Style (Elegant, shabby etc): Basic, hipster
Dress/Clothing: Wears neutral clothing
Mannerisms: Polite, shy
Hobbies: ice skating, rollerblading, art and photography
Favourite Sayings: ‘A #2 pencil and dream can take you anywhere’ Joyce A Myers
Speech Patterns: Tends to speak softly with a clear voice

Emotional Characteristics

Strengths: Open minded
Weaknesses: Easily manipulated by others
What motivates this character? Will power
What frightens this character? Her condition
What makes this character happy? Friendship
Introvert or Extrovert: Introvert

What is this Character’s Goal? To have a ‘real best friend’


Intellectual/Mental/Personality Attributes and Attitudes

Educational Background: The Smith Brown School
Character's short-term goals in life: To forget about Aimee, her invisible friend
How does Character see himself/herself? A 16 year old girl torn between fantasy and reality
How does Character believe he/she is perceived by others? Good friend, quiet and passive
How self-confident is the character? Her self confidence is average, her mental illness has affected it
Does the character seem ruled by emotion or logic or some combination thereof? Both, in the case of Aimee, she has realised that she isn’t real but emotionally she yearns for a best friend so she wishes that Aimee were real.
What would most embarass this character? If people found out about her illness
Best Characteristics: Trustworthy, creative, friendly
Worst Characteristics: Quiet, sometimes to the extent that she bores others
Does the character have any prejudices? No

Additional Notes on This Character: Her mental illness has made Jade a very confused person. However, now on medication, she is getting better and had come to the realization that Aimee is a figment of her imagination. Jade wishes to have a best friend and to get better overtime.


Character Profile Worksheet
Basic Information/Statistics

Name: Aimee Johnson
Age: 16
Current Residence: Sydney, Australia
Occupation: Student
Talents/Skills: Good at singing, drama

Physical Characteristics:

Height: 160cm
Weight: 52kg
Race: Caucasian
Skin Colour: Beige
Eye Colour: Blonde
Glasses/Contact Lenses: None
Hair Colour: Green
Facial Shape: round
Distinguishing Features: Long blonde hair, usually in pigtails
Style (Elegant, shabby etc): Chic, kiddy
Dress/Clothing: fluorescent singlets, shorts, bandeau swimmers
Mannerisms: Bubbly, loud
Hobbies: Singing, drawing, acting
Favourite Sayings: none
Speech Patterns: Laughs a lot and talks loudly and fast

Emotional Characteristics

Strengths: Charismatic, positive
Weaknesses: Can sometimes be annoying
What motivates this character? Encouragement, especially by Jade
What frightens this character? The fact that she isn’t real
What makes this character happy? Ice cream, Jade
Introvert or Extrovert: Extrovert

What is this Character’s Goal? To be Jade’s best friend… forever


Intellectual/Mental/Personality Attributes and Attitudes

Educational Background: Home school
Character's short-term goals in life: To learn how to rollerblade
How does Character see himself/herself? A happy and bubbly 16 year old girl
How does Character believe he/she is perceived by others? Loud, positive and willing to succeed
How self-confident is the character? Her self confidence is very high, she doesn’t care what others think about her as long as she is happy
Does the character seem ruled by emotion or logic or some combination thereof? Emotion
What would most embarass this character? Self confidence is too high
Best Characteristics: Happy, positive, humorous
Worst Characteristics: Can sometimes boast and get carried away
Does the character have any prejudices? No

Additional Notes on This Character: Only Jade can see Aimee since she is invisible. Aimee is the opposite of Jade in terms of personality, and helps to make Jade a happier and more positive person.


New film idea

Last night I felt that my film idea wasn't very exciting/interesting, so I developed a twist to the plot.

The original idea was that the girl was looking through a photo album and her ex-best-friend had died.

My new idea is that the ex-best-friend is actually invisible because the girl made her up since she has some sort of mental illness. After the girl starts taking medication, her invisible friend goes away because she is getting better.

I feel that this idea is much more creative and interesting than my original idea and I will be able to include awesome cinematography and editing to give hints to the audience that something isn't right with the invisible friend.

I've started to draw some storyboards, so I should be able to meet the deadline next Wednesday.

Plot Recipe

Ingredients:


1 teenager


1 red photo album


1 messy desk


a handful of photographs


a loving family


a friend


a mental illness


lighting which sets the scene


a room


a beach


a road


a house


a party room





Recipe:





The story begins with a teenager named Jade cleaning her desk. She finds a red suede photo album which she opens. As she looks through the album, the photos trigger flashbacks. In her first flashback, Jade sees herself rollerblading with a girl called Aimee. They have a great time as Jade attempts to teach Aimee how to rollerblade. This demonstrates a happy atmosphere. In her second flashback, Jade is seen at a beach with Aimee. They splash eachother and have a great time. Add a supervising lifeguard is shown observing the beach. He only sees Jade, Aimee is invisible. This creates suspense and mystery. In her third flashback, Jade holds an invitation to her birthday party which is written to Aimee. Jade scrunches the paper up and throws it onto the floor. Her mum picks it up and reads it. After more suspense is added to the recipe, she goes to her husband and says 'Its working'. The fourth and final flashback is of Jade's party without Aimee. Jade is slightly depressed and upset, she wishes she could see Aimee. The sad mood in the party ends the flashbacks with more suspense as to why Jade did not invite Aimee. Jade goes to the kitchen and takes pills. Her mental health is revealed and Aimee turns out to be invisible. Jade's mum asks what Jade was doing and she replies. Jade's mum says 'you know Aimee's not real, right?' For a seemingly happy ending, add 'I know, I made her up. I'm better now, right?' or for a dramatic ending, add 'No, she's real mum. I see her every day.'

Interview with a vampire story boarding activity

James Smith was born with super human abilities. He can use the power of his mind to control those around him. However, only he knows this, and as a result keeps it a secret. James is in his senior year at school. He's the best runner in the school and uses his powers in sport so the others will lose and run slower. However, he also used his powers to manipulate a young girl named Samantha into loving him. What he doesn't realize, is that although he can manipulate people into loving him, it's impossible to do the opposite, this applies to other people. Samantha had always loved a boy called Simon and cheats on James this way. James finds this out, and corners him in the chapel since Simon is the pastors son and had to go clean the pews. James, enraged, enters and argues with him. When Simon admits that he is seeing Samantha, James uses his powers to attack Simon. The attack kills him and James becomes desperate. The guilt became too agonizing for him to bear, so he turns his powers on himself.





The storyboard was meant to be of a vampire and priest. However, I thought I'd try and interpret the story boards differently, and I came up with the above. The storyboards are pretty much open to interpretation and can be turned into a thriller, drama, horror, fantasy even romance film. I had fun doing this activity and I found it interesting to hear about others' interpretations.

Storyboarding activity


This is from a storyboarding activity on blackboard. We were meant to draw up storyboards from a scenario. The scenario was about a bomb explosion on a ship and my interpretation is above.